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Practicing Cloudsby ~Exhale-NL

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Just trying out new techniques. Advanced critique is much appreciated.

Bottom part is a stock pic from corbis.
©2005-2013 ~Exhale-NL
Category: Scraps

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~F3rg Mar 17, 2005
I have to admit i dont really like it. though something about the clouds looks really realistic.
The main thing i dont like is the soild each on them
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~phoenix07 Mar 16, 2005   Digital Artist
getting there man. they look very 3d, but i dont think the lighting is good enuf :)

keep going.
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~crump3t Mar 16, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
needs more variety....


needs alot more white highights, glows etc, and not such a cut out form.. more wispy, even if you want the very chiseld looking clouds, it needs more variation in the shape. it all ends a bit too suddenly too.. but mainly you need more white highights etc.
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~Exhale-NL Mar 17, 2005
i see, thanks alot for the comment. I agree that the highlights should be better, but this ain't the original color. In the original color (peach/orange) the highlights looked better.
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~crump3t Mar 17, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
ah yes, in that hue, it would probably work better. why did you change it?
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~Exhale-NL Mar 18, 2005
to fit the photo better, but afterall i shouldn't have added the photo lol.
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~Mousyman Mar 16, 2005
Personally they seem a little stiff to me. Kind of like soft rocks if thats possible..Maybe best said as they seem like weathered rocks.
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~P-Seraphic Mar 16, 2005   Digital Artist
clouds have that feeling that are way too near you, its as if they werent far from the plain makes it irrealistic, kinda, dunno has too much depth maybe? for a cloud, it has an actual shape, clouds are just weird stuff lol
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~spawnsyxx9 Mar 16, 2005  Hobbyist
Nice layout though if I may say just a tad less detail mostly because in clouds you really can't see that much in them. But still very nice.
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~DeathCry Mar 16, 2005
nice praticing work on the brushing, i know it hard, i cant brush like that yet
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